Pretty original song but for me the song screams for more instruments like a violin, arp or something like that. Your beats were really cool, they had some really interesting syncopate (not sure is that is how you write it on English) Although the composition was good the bass was kind of annoying I would like to hear that bass with some better EQ work on it. The part that you had a kind of dubstep bass on it was a good idea but I'd recommend you on putting more intensity on that LFO because it sound kind of abstract and you couldn't appreciate it too much. Another thing I got to say it was the way that you play with the drum and the bass timing gives the song a nice diversity.